Hurry Up and Wait
Name of the critter:
Name of the critiqued:
Does the sequence look
finished? How is the craft?
Is the art clear? Can you tell what is being depicted? Be specific, citing both positive and
negative examples.
What is the subject of this
sequence? What is the complete action or
story arc?
How is the pacing? Are there two different paces being
shown? Which character experiences
slower time, and which experiences a faster time?
Can you follow the
action? Can you tell what is being shown
in each panel and over the course of the comic?
Is there ever confusion as to what order in which to read the panels?
Is the page (or pages) well-organized?
How is the “acting” in the
strip? Are characters’ facial
expressions and body language clear? Do
the expressions emote correctly?
Is the strip interesting? Would you want to read more strips like
this? Why or why not? If not, what is missing?
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