Name of critter:
Name of critiqued:
Does the sequence look
finished?
What is the subject of the
sequence?
What is the complete action
or story arc?
Is the art clear? Can you tell what is going on at each stage? Be specific, citing both positive and
negative examples.
Can you follow each
action? Can you tell what is being
shown?
Is the art compelling? Be specific.
Does the work avoid using
words?
Are all seven sins (wrath,
lust, sloth, gluttony, pride, avarice, envy) represented? Can you tell which sins are which?
Describe the pacing. Does it
change? If so, does the change reinforce the narrative or hurt it?
Is the story effectively told
with the existing number of panels? Are there superfluous panels or does the
story need more – if so, where and why?
Is there ever confusion about
the reading order of the panels?
Is the page
well-organized? Does the layout of the
panels add to the communication of the story or detract from it?
How is the “acting” in the
strip? Are the characters’ facial
expressions and body language clear? Do they emote well?
Is the strip
interesting? Would you want to read
more? If so, why? IF not, what is missing?
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